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BOHEMIAN PEARL

Thanks to sel_barton for the lovely Editing she's done. She may be sorry... I may have to make her my bitch new bestest friend. ~_^

Here's a rather LONG original Short Story and Art
"BOHEMIAN PEARL"


Yeah, I'm a sappy romance ho. I like it, I hope you do too...

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haydenthorne
Oct. 5th, 2004 06:36 am (UTC)
Yay! Original stuff! Am printing your story to read at my leisure; I'll be giving you feedback in a day or two. ^_^ (and your bish look yummy!)
fablespinner
Oct. 5th, 2004 07:03 am (UTC)
I want a David of my very own. *nod nod*

Just make him sit there, play me music, and look dashing in a suit.

Lucky Alexi

:PP

Thanks!
sel_barton
Oct. 5th, 2004 12:44 pm (UTC)
Hurrah!
Glad to be of service, Mistress. ~_^

I will be glad to be your bitch/slave when you want me. May have to bribe me with pretty pics and go, don't draw that line like that here, though. :p

Nah, I enjoyed it. (The beta and the story!) And no fair, I want Alexi or David. I'm not picky. I'll settle for an good male even if he doesn't have a memory. ^_^

fablespinner
Oct. 5th, 2004 02:57 pm (UTC)
Re: Hurrah!
:PPPPP

I know I want David too... Alexi gets him though the lucky bugger.

^_^
laughingwolf
Oct. 5th, 2004 04:46 pm (UTC)
I loved the art, but the story that went with it was just adorable!! made me all sappy now! I want to go hug someone!!! *grin*

Just wonderful D! *Grin*
fablespinner
Oct. 5th, 2004 05:09 pm (UTC)
I love sap and good old-fashioned romance. I'm a sucker for it, I don't like too much angst. Just enough to make the good bits sweeter.

I'm so predictable.

THANKS!
laughingwolf
Oct. 5th, 2004 05:24 pm (UTC)
Ya know, i used to read (still do when i find one that catches my attention) all the old romance novels that you get at the grocery store and stuff. Was in love with love!! *grin*

and there's nothing wrong with that in the least!

I like to add angst only cause i make my peeps work for their happy endings! *Grin* i'm a terrible task master in that respect. *laughs*

But hell i should be thanking you for sharing the art and the story!! So thank you too!! *Grin*
fablespinner
Oct. 5th, 2004 06:31 pm (UTC)
I'm really picky about my romance novels now, a lot of them anymore are just intert tab A in slot B for 100 pages.

Don't get me wrong, I love hot steamy sex, but I like a little PLOT in there somewhere too.

^_^

Lynn Kurtkland is really good. I love her book "The More I See You." very good book.

^_^
laughingwolf
Oct. 6th, 2004 03:23 am (UTC)
Yeah, i've noticed that too and my friend and i were talking about that as well, about wanting plot to go with the sex, making the sex advance the plot, or enhance it, not just have the story so there is sex.

I'll have to check her out. I have loved Johanna Lindsey's books for years because she always has alot of humor in her books along with the plot and steamy sex!
fablespinner
Oct. 6th, 2004 03:39 am (UTC)
I love humor in a romance novel, it makes it feel REAL

^_^
laughingwolf
Oct. 6th, 2004 03:55 am (UTC)
So do i!! for just that reason! *grin* I'll have to bring you a johanna Lindsey book at Yaoicon! *Grin*
fablespinner
Oct. 6th, 2004 05:14 am (UTC)
I'll find my Lynn -- We'll trade!
:PPPP
pmdorian
Oct. 6th, 2004 02:19 am (UTC)
Oh I love good sap and this hit the spot ^____^ Haven't read anything of the sort in a long tme and I'm glad I read this one, bravo. All of the guys I write about in my stories, the one I never show, are all like David. I'm tellin' ya, there need to be more Davids out there ^____^
quatrekat
Oct. 6th, 2004 04:53 pm (UTC)
I just wanted to say that I absolutely loved this story. I nearly cried in some parts (I work in a predominantly male lab so I had to quell it quick :P) and found myself clutching my heart in others. Absolutely absorbing. Much, much better than reading about "M cell targeting by lectins". ^_^
fablespinner
Oct. 6th, 2004 04:59 pm (UTC)
Much, much better than reading about "M cell targeting by lectins". ^_^

Unless of course you're reading about:
"S&M cell targeting by lectins in leather".
:P

(I poke fun like I know WTF you do... O_O OW brain hurt. D-mongo only pawn in game of life.)

THANKS! ^____________________^
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fablespinner
Oct. 6th, 2004 08:08 pm (UTC)
Thanks, and go rest lady! No typing one handed, it's bad for you.

~_^
preventerdust
Oct. 8th, 2004 06:05 am (UTC)
More!
Just finished reviewing! Wondeful job. You so rock! Beautiful story. David and 'Lexi are great! ;melts;
fablespinner
Oct. 8th, 2004 08:35 am (UTC)
Re: More!
Thank You!


^___________________^
haydenthorne
Oct. 11th, 2004 06:26 pm (UTC)
Ta da! ^_^ Late, yes, so hopefully I'm not in the doghouse. ^^;

There ain't nothing wrong with sap, D. In fact, we can all get too damned serious with writing and forget to appreciate the lighter, more optimistic side of life, and having been bowled over by horrible workdays and now Christopher Reeve's death, I'm in desperate need of romance. Pure, simple, optimistic sweetness. ^_^

You haven't lost your touch, bubba. This is classic D writing with sweet characters and touching situations (the rape bit must have been difficult to write, so I salute you even more for tackling such a sensitive subject). And now that I'm more inclined to read original fiction from my friends than fanfiction, I hope you'll be indulging us with more of your stories.

*poke,prod*
fablespinner
Oct. 12th, 2004 03:06 am (UTC)
Absolutely, I like my boys and there's a lot of them waiting in the Wings.

So much sap, so many men, so little time.

^_^

Thanks!
*hugs*
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