August 10th, 2003

aph-SuFin (My Art) 2

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WOOT! Thanks Sara!


You shall henceforth be known as:

Deputy of The Ancient Order of Karaoke Bars, The Fablespinner D

Put that in your Palm V and smoke it.



*or*



You shall henceforth be known as:

Provost Emeritus of The Penis Coalition, Dana Jean Sanders

Maybe now your mom will stop calling you "bitch".




YEAH BABY YEAH!

Name and Title Generator DO ME!
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aph-SuFin (My Art) 2

Damn Plot Bunnies!

I DO NOT NEED ANOTHER EPIC!
I DO NOT NEED ANOTHER EPIC!
I DO NOT NEED ANOTHER EPIC!
I DO NOT NEED ANOTHER EPIC!
I DO NOT NEED ANOTHER EPIC!
I DO NOT NEED ANOTHER EPIC!

This is getting much more involved than I intended... damn it.

I'm still nowhere near where I want to be, damn characters for drawing scenes out in my head!

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aph-SuFin (My Art) 2

Thanks for the advice!

Thanks to everyone's comments, I’ve reworked this section in chapter four I posted last night, and tried adjusting the flow and intent to try and make more sense.

Again it's not grammatical errors right now I'm seeking advice on, but content and flow, and plot movement. I'll fix the structural stuff later.

^_^

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THANKS!
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